I'd been thinking for sometime to put my poems in a different space. Finally, I've done just that and this blog will be the place for them...and I also love quotes and thoughts...now I can collect them here:-)... I will start by posting one of the first poems I wrote...which is also where I got the inspiration for the title of my main blog!:-)
A walk down that old familiar laneRevisiting pain
Never thought I’d live through it again
Left with empty words
happy and aching memories
Time seems to stand still
No one left to love...to please
Remembering lines from a song
We once danced to
Your smile as u whispered
I love you
Tears...now...fears
Of facing a world without you
Too late to change
what could have been
Should have been
Left alone to face a fate
I’d never seen
Nothing eases this pain
I’ll survive I know
Yet again
Just another walk down that old familiar lane
i remember this poem u wrote it on ur old blog as well as hi5:)Nice to see now u will manage 2 blogs alltogether
ReplyDeletenice title of the poem n nicer lines too :)
ReplyDeletehappy new blog ... n keep penning down more n more poems
nice poems. well done
ReplyDeletethat was beautiful...liked it:)
ReplyDeleteEven though I'm in a silly mood, it would be classified as Blasphemy if I were to tweak this poem.
ReplyDeleteExcellent
Vipul: yaa i did:)...this one is one of my favs...
ReplyDeleteSudeep: thanks:)...will do so!! @ "keep penning down more n more poems" :-)
ReplyDeleteKaunquest & Yashita thanks:)
ReplyDeleteRupen: hmmm!!! *grins*...thanks:)