Thursday, March 23, 2006

Reminisce

Not all love stories have a happily ever after. To live through betrayal and move ahead ... is what the lines below talk about. Memories make it more difficult to walk away... the heart pulls us back while the head pulls us forward...Life's never the same once we live through a heartbreak....we are never the same...

I smile…
Reminiscing...
The way your fingers brushed my lips…
The way your lips followed...
Tracing your love...

I laugh...
Reminiscing…
The things you did to make me laugh...
The stand up routine...
The sound of your laughter...

I cry...
Reminiscing...
The way you looked at her...
Your hands...holding her...
The promises broken...

I hurt...
Reminiscing...
The days...the nights...
We shared...
 
Never to hear you...
Never to feel you...

I hope...
I pray...
I will survive...
Will survive a life …
Without you...
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9 comments:

  1. illusionsFriday, March 24, 2006 7:35:00 PM

    :((

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  2. SudeepFriday, March 24, 2006 8:50:00 PM

    tht was getting hotter
    n ekdum phhuuuussssshhh

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  3. ishipishiSaturday, March 25, 2006 10:39:00 AM

    Rupen: ???

    Sudeep: lolz...wen i started it, it was meant to continue in that note but i seem to always get sum..."sadness" into my work...kya kare!?!:)

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  4. illusionsTuesday, March 28, 2006 10:32:00 AM

    No worries...I was just being naughty...":(("...is best picturized as - A thirty one year old with his hands over his forehead with a deluge of tears filling a bucket.

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  5. AstralTuesday, April 11, 2006 5:08:00 PM

    i told you this is one of the best you can ever write ..... take care always..... you are a survivor and i know it

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  6. ishipishiThursday, April 13, 2006 9:35:00 AM

    Suchi: hmmmm:-)...there's only one way to live na...kickk out pain and embrace smiles...

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  7. Known StrangerThursday, April 13, 2006 10:16:00 AM

    there si also another way to live

    chase the past
    in the present
    to live in future

    pain being the lesson.
    smiling in pain
    is living

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  8. Known StrangerThursday, April 13, 2006 10:17:00 AM

    Reminiscing
    the pain
    I survived
    by you
    makes me smile
    at my death

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  9. AnonymousWednesday, January 03, 2007 11:13:00 AM

    the poem was great. i wanna ask you a Q- have you lost someone you loved????????? -Mishti

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